MERMAIDS! There's mermaids guys! In this episode we dissect Lianna's chapter 5 when things start to heat up for our FMC Olivia as she takes matters into her own hands to go track down and question the one lead she has. This is another deep dive critique where we discuss character continuity, writing emotional impact, getting readers to resonate with off page characters, backstory, and prose!

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Co-hosted, edited, and produced by: Lianna Feng and Dakota S.

Artwork by: Rachel Mehus

Music by: Dakota via the magic of GarageBand

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