In the version of english I use to attempt communication with others, the one that today is spoken in the nation currently labeled the United States of America in the spacetime moment that is the "year after the year" Love Was Left on the Cutting Room Floor - in that specific version of reality - I really think the collective nailed it on one word:

1. flaw(s)(ed)
2. and maybe one phrase: "run-on sentences".

I'll even go so far as to include FLAW as an example of onomatopoeia but completely understand if you feel less "buzz" in your assessment.

1. But,
2. You know me.

Pushing the boundaries of language possibilities to the point of blundering right through agreed upon structural norms is kind of my thing to do... right Ms. Palin?

Or is that Governor Palin? I get confused ...